In this peice of writing I think I did a good job at keeping my "see saw" pattern organized and clear. I feel as if I protrayed my differences and likes in a very organized fashion. I feel like the best part of my essay was in the third and fourth paragraphs where I explained how the two articles differed and we're alike. I took a lot of time trying to make each argument clear and coherent.
I had a difficult time trying to find the perfect spot for my thesis. I now think I would place it in a different spot and drop a couple of uneeded sentences. I would make this piece better by getting rid of some details on online dating. Some of my information wasn't needed for my argument but to inform the reader of online dating all together. Which I now think is not needed.
I learned a lot from writing this essay. I gained knowledge on how to read directions of a piece and really follow them without getting so confused. For example when I starated writing my paper o began to research online dating and putting a lot of detail in my paper that did not need to be in there. I needed to focus on which argument was better. Also I learned that it is very important to place your thesis in the right place because it sets the state for the reader so to speak and helps the reader not to be confused. I learned how to organize my thoughts better and use a template (sample essays) to put a peice together.
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